My Out Burst Of Emotion(Acrostic)

by ASPHYXIATED   Apr 6, 2006


Many years I smiled & Lied,
Yowled in pain as each night I cried.

Outpouring words onto a page,
Unaware of bottled rage,
Tattered dreams washed away,
Broken smiles were here to stay,
Usage of that crimson knife,
Razed my only chance in life,
Septic views lost me all respect,
Trying to hard to be what they expect.

Ordeals each day when I awoke,
Forgotten words we seldom spoke.

Entangled in each screaming war,
Mascara dripping upon the floor,
Obscene memory's of you and I,
Then you hold me as I cry?
Ignoramus darling, Just let me go,
Observe as I set myself free,
Never again pretending I'm not me..

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!.u r really good in this acrostic work...beautiful poem...seems too true n real...=/
    But great write=)..filled wth deep emotions penned in a very touching way...Fab write!

    5/5=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I know this feeling.
    I have a lot of raged bottled up. =/
    I have to write almost every day to help with that. =///
    5/5
    Well-written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    It's neat that you like to do acrostic poetry and actually make poetry. Keep it up because I enjoy reading your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Lisa, this was a real sad, deep and emotional poem.. it was real good, though!

    You're such a good writer..

    if you ever wanna talk, I'm here.. just e-mail me or hop on MSN.. I'm always willing to help.

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