Love and not hate.

by ASPHYXIATED   Apr 12, 2006


Her broken promise,
A bloodstained note,
Tears fell rapidly,
As she wrote;
" I can no longer,
Live this lie,
Each broken smile,
Each useless try,
Perfection bleeds,
Beauty weeps,
I bid farewell,
As family sleeps,
I'm a failure,
A mistake,
A waste of space,
I'm a fake.

Nothings real,
Life's falling apart,
Dreams crushed,
Broken heart,
Wasted life,
All respect lost,
Perfection needed,
At any cost,
Self Mutilation,
No self respect,
Beauty's everything,
everyones request,
Worthless life,
Tear stained regrets,
With this pistol,
I'll fulfill self threats. "

Her confessions,
Handwritten&old,
Tell a story,
Too often told,
We take advantage,
of our life,
Self obsession,
Crimson knife,
We want Beauty,
Perfection & all,
Teens these days,
Continually fall,
We can't see,
Something so great,
We need to learn,
To love and not hate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I loved it!
    It was amazing.
    The flow was great.
    I love how you added the title in without ruining the flow.
    It was great.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Rawwr. amazing. brilliant. grand. wow. i'm jealous of your talent.

    seriously, this poem amazes me...i like the way it flows, and the way you wrote it...

    =)

    love you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Restles Soul

    Wow babes! dis is sutming dats always on my mind!! wow you put it in words i could not even describe!!! its just brilliant! the flow was absolutely amaizing! i honestly think this is my favourite poem! wow...just wow....

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Wow.. this poem was amazing! You get a 5/5 for it! .. and beeing cool from giving me pie.. a while ago!