My Fairy

Nitin
I love this piece Rachel picked for your feature writers week. I fell in love with it when I first read it. It reads like a fairytale :)

won't you come out of your lonely shell
and on these roses of love, walk with me
allow my shoulder to comfort your head
while i try to make your soul so carefree
wrap your hands around my waist
for that's how i imagined my journey to be
lay down while resting your ears on my heart
and feel the love which in your eyes i could see
fly high with these wings of love while i create
a tale to be remembered forever of me and my fairy
coming from the mountains full of shining stars
and the waterfalls which with you i see so clearly

so walk with me...

I could read this over and over and never get tired of it.
~Bravo~
Love Cindy

Nitin
I had to comment on this one again...since it has been awhile since I had read it...Still holds the beauty I saw in your words the first time I read this beautiful poem.

lay down while resting your ears on my heart
and feel the love which in your eyes i could see
fly high with these wings of love while i create
a tale to be remembered forever of me and my fairy
coming from the mountains full of shining stars
and the waterfalls which with you i see so clearly

so walk with me...

Breath taking.
Love Cindy

This was like one of the most beautiful poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Excellent job!

Love the ending

................lovely............
and so charmingly romantic

and, thank You........