A Step Into Depression

WOW!!!! i really loved this poem and i can relate to it really easy. I loved the whole poem especially the last couple parts
"Once a girl so proud and strong
Now lingers amongst the weak,
In dearest terms I'd say it's me,
But I don't trust the words I speak.

I walk into the darkness,
and quiver through the light
It's hard for me to understand;
To distinguish wrong from right.

And I do not see the problem,
Perfection has now become my curse,
Most epidemics have no cure
And mine is standing at it's worst."

those i can relate to the most. and i really liked it. your a really great poet and you should definately keep writing -Jen-

Wow this poem is absolutly amazind keep up the good work!

Excellent use of words, written beautifly , amazing flow this all makes an astonishing poem :) the title stood out among all others :) I mean it if i say your one of the best poets i know, well "know" lol you know what i mean ;) 5/5

~StefQ

This poem was very well written! excellent job

I could defintely feel the raw pain as I read this. You got your message and emotions across to the reader which is by far marvelous. You're work had a nice simple flow.

It is great when the audience can relate because that is when you actually get the good critics. When they cannot only feel your pain, but their own. This was a great portrayl of stepping into Depression... a transmission between Innocence and Saddness... this has to be one of my favorites I've read so far.

Great Job. Keep writing.