The Question

by Jacob Perry   Apr 20, 2006


I sit on this end of the phone
talking and laughing away
listening to a voice i wish i could own
while i think of what next to say.

i think and hope and sit and wait
while i ponder this hopeful fate
while the thirst inside i seek to sate
i wonder if my heart can wait

shall i ask her on that date?
will i take this leap of faith?
but now the question comes so great
do i trust myself to deal with such a wraith?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was lovely, it was so well written and expressed well. keep it up
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice, well protrayed thoughout with some good expression. it may be relitivly short but holds a lot of depth.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    I know just the feeling jacob, I think you have captured it wonderfully.

    In fact i know the feeling alot, the doubts, the not knowing, the will it work outs? the will it ruin it?
    Ah such is life..

    Hmm, yes a great poem.
    Well Done!

    Jon