Look at me

by Krysten   Apr 20, 2006


Look at me
see my pain
see the tears
fall like rain
look at me
see the way
i hate living
through the day
look at me
see my scars
see my heart
behind the bars
look at me
don't turn away
stop pretending
I'll be okay
look at me
see my blade
see all of
the cuts I've made
look at me
see my life
see me take it
with this knife
look at me
see me go
what was wrong
you'll never know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is a nicely flowing piece, I enjoyed reading and rating this. I felt really easy to my tongue, thats due to the nice wordings. Keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Fantastic. the short lines work really well and the flow is flawlessly smooth thoughout, loads of feeling in this peice and some very powerfully written lines.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylead

    I dont know what to say just 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. Short lines with alot of emotion! I liked it!! 5/5 =]

    `natalie xx

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