What Do You See?

by 111308   Apr 20, 2006

Look in the mirror what do you see?
A ugly young girl starin back at me..
She wears long sweatshirts to cover the scars
She has fringes at the eyes so people can't see her drowning in the pain, agony,misery and sorrow...

Look in the mirror what do you see?
I see a young girl staring blankley at me
She doesn't know what to do with her life
Everything seems to go wrong,
She looks up and you can tell shes crying,
And that right now she wishes she was dieing....

Look in the mirror what do you see?
The younger girl is crying right infront of me,
You can tell in her eyes she wants and needs to end her life,
She takes the knife,
And cuts down on her wrists,
The blood is going everywhere on the floor and even the chair,
You see her fall to her bed,
She must be dead,

Look in the mirror what do you see?
A young girl dead infront of me,
Then it passes through my mind who must she be?
Then I realize...
That this young girl wasnt just some girl.....
It\'s always been ME......


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  • 14 years ago

    by hayley

    Wow. thats amazing. i still cant get over how good of a writter u r.

  • 14 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Hey yet again another astounding poem. i have to admit i'm running out of adjectives. your writing really involves the reader and they are so hooked they can't stop till they reach the end. you are so gifted. keep the comments coming i love to hear / read what you think. feel free to email me or add me to msn.


  • 15 years ago

    by X2892

    I know u did write it i was saying if u actullay did that becuase i have but i didnt die

  • 15 years ago

    by amber

    I love it it is so great i can totally relate to that good job you have talent

  • 15 years ago

    by Brisa

    I liked the way you finished off your poem. it was a surprise ending. loved it.xoxo.