In the cold light of morning

"The blood is yet to cool"... HAS yet? Has sounds better than is, in my opinion. Feel free to ignore me though :)

"Innocents" needs an apostrophe - innocent's.

Also, I think "judgement" is spelled judgment. Might want to check on that.

Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar/spelling Nazi. Part of being an Editor of a paper for several years.

The poem itself is fantastic though, great word choices and description usage. :)

Intrigued.
Speaks yet it's dead.
I like this.
welcome to my favs

Im sure you'll win.
this poem is really good. Its really well written with a great flow through it all.

Kat

Wow.. Brilliant poem. I loved it so much hun. So beautifull written, once again with a fantastic flow. I love the story it tells, it's so sad.

Wow.. what else can I say about this poem? It's just fantastic!

Loved it!

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

You'll win i am sure, i loved that poem as much as any of yours. xx good luck
keep writing
Love Tara-Kay