A monster; A mistake
by Sarah Ann Apr 24, 2006
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18 years ago
Great ppoem
def 5/5
luv ya mel -
18 years ago
Great ppoem
def 5/5
luv ya mel -
18 years ago
Great ppoem
def 5/5
luv ya mel -
18 years ago
And I can't walk away from it
The force has me inside the chain
The one forever bearing,
Portraying-impelling all the pain
^^ I loved your wording in that stanza it was very powerful definatly my favorite part
God, I was never fit for that position
You created a monster; a mistake
^^ Hun God doesn't make mistakes you by far are NOT a mistake! AT ALL! because you may be going through things does not make you a monster..if your a monster because of that...guess everyone else is too!
I really liked this poem you expressed yourself very well and do keep it up!
GOd Bless and have a good day!
Chels -
18 years ago
I loved your chose of word and the alliteration I feel the pain in that poem. Great job.
