You'll Never See Me Cry

by BlueEyedMystery   Apr 28, 2006


Slicing my skin,
Thinking of you,
You lied to me,
Now we're through.

You never cared,
You watched me break,
Now i'm scared,
I'll never wake.

So now I say goodbye,
It's time to let you go,
You'll never see me cry,
This i'll always know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I dunno what you're on about this "my old poems were rubbish" stuff cuz they're not! Sure your new stuff is better but I still really like these oldies! I like the rhyming in this one. Nice and simple, telling it as it is. Super-de-duper effective.

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    The flow and rhymes were great, it had a really nice rythym to it. Sad, but really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    This flowed beautiful shrot but effective . i liked the title thats what made me want to read it . a great poem xxALLYxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow... such a short poem, yet it has so much power in it... says it all... keep ur chin up n be strong =)

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Another short poem but well explained and written. Keep up the great work and your talent is amazing. Thanks for reading my work. Take care Amanda :)

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