Lovers Murder

Biting her lips
Bleeding from the mouth
Chilliness from his eyes nips
The blood drips south

He tightens his grip
The blood seeps warmly
Soaking her bottom lip
Her life, he takes it calmly

Tears spill down her cheeks
As she sees the end draw near
Forever her body speaks
Through the torture she endures, with holding fear

He murders her in anger
With hatred so boldly shown
You never knew this danger
You never knew this home

Slowly the pain decreases
As the numbness takes over
Forehead, permeant with creases
No more luck of the clover

Memories play back
Of happier times of two lovers
All disintegrated with a blowing wack
Her body constantly shudders

This one lover left dieing
The other's hands are soaked with blood
The murderer is still lying
The tears come down in a flood

How can to hands that have shown so much love
Give so much pain in return?
Such an unexpected shove
So many new things to learn

Tears come down
Memories are relived
His heart left bound
Her life unlived

Please comment on this poem, so I can see if I need to improve on my writing skill. Thanks