Everything Im not

by Lying To Live   Apr 30, 2006


Lying in the bathtub
The water soaks into my skin
Tonights the night I give up
Giving in to all my sin

Please forgive me my dear lord
As I can no longer push away my frown
And lord please give me the strength
To have the courage to press down

You are so aware of everything
So you will know how ive tried to have more power
And how every night I couldnt take it
And id mark my skin in the shower

Respect my decision to leave this place
For I have given it everything I have got
I leave because everything I ever wanted to be
Is everything that im not
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This one is quite personal so comments and ratings are even more apreciated ....and i will return the favour ...XoX thanx

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Huni, you know I love you and I will always be here for you!

    This poem is outstanding! Sorry I didn't comment on it earlier!

    Keep it up...

    And rememeber I love you and I am here for you always...

    x x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by fairygirl

    Thats the most amazing poem ive read!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    email me if oyu need someone to talk to
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherri

    Brilliant! Masterful! Absolutely Breath Taking!!! ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job. I like this piece alot. The flow and structure is great. If you ever need to talk pm me. This poem is really deep and full of emotions that are trapped. Good job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BittersweetDecay

    This poem is amazingly deep and inspirational...congratulations...we can chat sometime if u wanna..and u can visit my poems if u wanna..*huggies*

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