Forever Hurt

...this is one of the saddest poems i've read in a long time. i hope you are okay. stay strong, ok? This is a great poem, you've really got some talent.

You have a real knack for writing... your poems are short, but when i'm looking at all of these, it's quick and easy... i enjoy them all... keep up the good work... i just hope i never have to experience what you just explained, even though i know every girl experiences a heartbreak

Thankx for the comment!

Ah..I can relate, not sure about the rest of the Team. But I can. Wonderful poem.

Comment Done By The «¤And We Write¤» Team. Enjoy!

Seems like I totally forgot I read your previous poem. So I'm reading this one to make up for it. (Mother's Day Poem)

This was short, but it went right to the point. Full of strong emotions. You can't be hurt forever, unless you are talking about physical pain. Emotional pain eventually goes away with time, so chin up :)

This poem was really good!! I love how it is simple eay to read and to the point, and still have alot of emotion!!! Great Work!!

Keep it up! :-)