Break the Fall

by Juls   May 5, 2006


Pretty as a summers day
Pure, clean and true
But this girl had serects too

She wanted to end it all
So many things gone wrong
16 years of pain she finally changed

One thing after another
It was never going to stop
So this is what she wrote to her end

"I was born without a sin
I was beautiful in the dark
but now its my time to say goodbye
and give my worries a depart
I held my time for 16 years
Now this rose has wilted
As my future years
Mom and dad..
I now this is the best so
dont be disstressed
when you see me lifeless
lying in my bed"

Eyes were dry
Hands so still
As she reached for the gun

She didnt want to miss
She knew it was best for all
Stand tall than bed break the fall

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  • 19 years ago

    by forgetmenot

    5/5 well done!!!
    lizzie
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I liked this poem. I see all the imagery in my head while I read this. It's really good.

    I've never seen a poem with a three line stanza structure.

    So this was a first to me.

    Also, it was interesting that they were in all in groups of three, and then all of a sudden there was the meat of the poem, all clumped together.

    I must admit I really didn't understand the ending.

    Great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by I Dont Care Bear

    I loved it, keep^ the good work

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