I'm the one..

by BlueEyedMystery   May 8, 2006


I'm the reject,
The screw up,
The one they'll never love.

I'm the liar,
The cheater,
The one who hates the sun.

I'm the emo,
The goth,
The one who doesn't belong.

I'm the monster,
The geek,
Singing this sad song.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This is a really sad poem, and it seems like something is bothering you. If you have any problems and need someone to talk to, private message me :) I'll be happy to help.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cueball24

    WOW!! THAT WAS COOL AND AMAZING!! *kisses her lips passionately* I love you hunni

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Fabulous. Really dark and heartfelt. You kept this one short and I think this worked well in this case. The poem had a very strong rhythm and showed a very clear discontent. The last line I thought was a little out, I think it would scan better if you changed it so that it read:
    "Singing this sad song" Great stuff though, 5/5 x

  • 17 years ago

    by gemowski

    Arrrrrh hun so much emotion in this piece. i hop you arr thank you so much for you comments.

    luv gema
    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Short and sad. It was weird reading and hearing it from the first person perspective. Enhanced the reality...awakened the sadness...brill...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

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