by ASPHYXIATED May 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
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Your master, |
by Jenni Marie
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Another good poem. 5/5 |
by Jessica
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Wow! that was so dark, so poweful, so intense! excellent write! the way you used short lines really added to the dark affect of the poem and the descriptions were amazing! 5/5 |
by *Daniel94*
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Holly great, they was the best lyrics, i know i love most of the music you do so have ya seen the johny cash movie walk the line, get back to me on that one at my site. cheers |
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AwEsOmE!1!1 |
by Natalie
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This was awesome! It all flowed really well, And the rhyme scheme was also good. An awesome job overall. I'd love to hear it to music. 5/5 |