Never will I forget our friendship

by ~*~Morgan~*~   May 9, 2006


Here I lay
Thinking of when
We used to laugh and play
And be the closes of friends

We are still there
For one another
If you are scared
Or even fall for my brother!!

I'll charish and love you
Until our days come to an end
My friendship will always stay true
You are like a sister, my best friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I liked it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Morgan --
    Grammar, grammar, grammar. Something you must not know much about. You REALLY have to work on the grammar in here ;; the exclaimation points don`t work at all, because your poem doesn`t hold the emotion to add them. Most poems don`t. You`ve got spelling mistakes in there, and the flow doesn`t work well either. The rhyming wasn`t bad. I guess I was generous about giving you a 4/5. You can definitely improve this ;; I know you can.
    Its been nice reading your work. Take my advice into consideration, and you`ll do a lot better. I promise.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    Aw. =) it's cute. it's a little short, but it's still really cute lol, and i have friends i think of as sisters and that's always a good feeling. I liked it. good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Dowlly

    This is a very sweet poem, i't was a pleasure to read! thanx for sharing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that was so good.. and so cute! i reallly loved it hun! keep up the wonderful work! 5/5

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