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Beautiful. Sounds like you've made your voice.

Nice job! you really are a good writer! I love ALL of your poems so far! wow, keep going, it will take you far!

Its interesting how you start out not really rhyming... but you fall into rhymes in the middle... like your developing your own technique... i love it!!! Dont let anyone tell you your poems arent good enough... because i've read many famous/published poems and the 2 you have on here are well beyond some of the ones ive read... i think you could easily get published if you tried hard enough. Keep up the great work... 5/5 -Jen-
PS. Im adding you to my favorites

Simply beautiful penned, though short, but flowed well yet great ended, beautiful done! keep them coming, have a great weekend, take care. bert

This poem was short but it was actually pretty good. Usually when I tell people that I also say how I rarely do say that about another person's poetry. The lines seemed to flow well and the pieces just seemed to fit. The only part I had trouble with was this one:
Open myself and let it all out
Fall in love and begin to shout
And maybe that was because of the word shout. But other than that great poem. Hoping you'll post more in the future.