Another Perspective

by Lady Vengeance   May 21, 2006


Dysfunctional life support
Tied up with string
We cover our faces
So the truth doesn't sting

A hybrid of problems
Born out of our lies
They'll show you who god is
Child, cover your eyes

"Your dreams are for sinners"
Said with hands on their hips
Oh, those Sunday school preachers
With their plastic pink lips

Salvation is yours child!
Just repent all your sins
Like "eating that candy"
And "not singing your hymns"

The book you call Holy
Is not without fault
And if it weren't so widespread
You'd say it a cult

For those who believe,
Don't take it to heart
But without your false god
Then you'd all fall apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Interesting. I really liked the flow, and how the rhyme made it come along smoothly. Some of those stanzas really speaked for their own and sent a great message. I really liked the last stanza, too, because it brought the whole poem to a conclusion. The meaning was great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. i loved this. It kind of made me think.. But it's very well thought out and the last stanza really stuck to me. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dracula

    HERE HERE!!!! magnificently written. chilling to the core.

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    A hybrid of problems
    Born out of our lies
    They'll show you who god is
    Child, cover your eyes

    ^^ That stanza gives this poem a little extra something...haven't figured it out yet, but that was my favorite part..DId love and enjoy the ending! Great writing..really liking your stuff!
    -Krissey

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    CHRISTIAN!!!
    Get it right geeZ
    anyway, it wasreally really great.
    as usual.
    very knowledgeable.
    and some would have arguments over it.
    I like that. lol
    hehe
    ~Em

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