Desire

by X~Angie~X   May 23, 2006


I have a burning desire
built up deep inside
cant live without you
Im going to unglue
onde day you'll see
that you mean everything to me
the desire I have
is for only you
I wont give up
cause Im not ready
to let you go
you\'re my burning desire to live
and not kill myself
thats the desire i have for you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bleedin Throu

    That poem is pretty swicked keep it up rock on~!

  • 17 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    Hey you commented on one of my poems so yeah I decided to check yours out. This one is good.. I liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Slowly I Disappear

    Hey I read all your poems, They were pretty good and i rated them.. you can tell you have improved on your writing of this poem in comparison to your very first one submitted.. I liked them.. Keep up the good work! i rated this poem 5/5, And thnx for the comment and vote/rating thing for my poem.. your good at writing.. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    This Poem Had a Natural Beauty, It Didn't Need Much To Be Beautiful! I Liked It Alot 5/5 *Keep It Up Your Talanted* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    Great poem! i definitely feel that way sometimes! keep it up 5/5
    x!xZoex!x

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