Alone , in the darkness

by Shriya   May 24, 2006


In the darkness
i see
what is that
who is there

what or who is
lurking around like that
i don' know who
but it made a screeching sound

you there it said to me
u have no manners
help me
by picking up my cloth

i picked it up
and what i saw made me scream
let me tell u something
that was the last scream i ever made

it was dripping of blood
lots of it
then i saw the persons
interstines

when i came face to face with it
i saw a skull looking back at me
i saw some dust come out from it's jaw
i said mom and i was plungd into the darkness
forever

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Hey hun i love your poem very dark indeed i loved the way you described your feelings it had so much emotion in a scarey way lol i loved it so much 5/5 no wait 10/5 even xoxroxyxox aka emily your best buddy hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Wow this one is very deep and kind of dark i guess that's why you put it in the dark poems section:) This one is my favorite of your poems:) keep writing you have a gift!:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Christian

    I like how you put this one together.

    I think you should add a little bit more in the middle and make it suspensful ya know?

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess Demonica

    Very imaginative poemand i have fallen in love with it.
    Brilliant
    xox Bev

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