Sonata In The Sky

by *~vixen~*   May 25, 2006


The sky springs to life, the suns fingers strumming at the black and blue
Birds in their resplendent glory
Singing songs to the morning dew

Violin stings of green until they fade away
Illuminating the orange and reds
Extinguishing the stars ablaze above our heads
The happiness of life and light it will portray

Clouds dancing to the blissful sound
Whilst the glorious guardian angels waltz around
Conductor looking on his fair earth
Giving great joy, merry and mirth

Sunset comes with its stunning beauty and lessening of light
The soothing cello strokes of purple come into play
Piano keys of yellow it will betray
The sky darkens; the sun gives one last unyielding plight

The blanket of night comes crashing down with a bang of thunder
In it comes with stars and planets, too the world's wonder
Stars strewn once again throughout the sky
Heaven and light saying their last good-bye

There is no dancing, there is no life, there is no sound to be heard of at night
The darkness only to be killed come morning light
Looming over us like a dark cloud of dreams
And oh how the droplets of memories gleam

The dead shadow that is the moon, tumbling toward us like a doomed prophecy
With dreams, with drugs, with waking nightmares
Of that the world can not see

Enfolding us into its ever dreaming world of death
Waiting until we breathe our very last breath
Then it will let us go from its bind
Its judgment we will forever bear in mind

You will hear us rejoicing to the ends of the earth
Light, life, warmth, which is the sun's worth
Nighttime is gone in a blink of an eye
Only to be replaced by the sonata in the sky

if you have read between the lines and found the real reason i wrote this poem tell me what you think it is in your comment

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  • 17 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Yeah I got it right too =0) This poem was just so beautifully written, strong words and strong meaning, caught me from the beginning to the end. I have never read a poem like this one, very unique...Keep up the good work

    much Love sabrina

  • 17 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Hey J.Lau got the hidden meaning great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Great use of imagery and clever intertwine of music and nature... the symphony of nature... This poem seems to dwell in the night and the darkness of "life"... disguised with the general perception of nature's beauty. How the writer longs for the glorious and beautiful life during the day, which sadly may not be the case in the writer's daily life. Great write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Some amazing imegry in this peice, and such powerful use of vocab and description. i do not think i found any hiden meaning as such in this peice, but the actual writting and structure are fantastic.

  • 17 years ago

    by amber

    This poems was exellent i love it!!!! this poem is very descriptive and i like that a lot about your poem!!!!! this is beyond a 5 it like 100 times better than 5!!!
    amber lynn

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