My world

by chavii   May 25, 2006


In my world there is no tear to cry,
no fear or pain to cloud over ones mind.

In my world there are no dark lonely nights,
bright cheerful sunshine fills everyones life.

In my world no seed of hatred and enmity strikes,
only the purest unconditional love and peace strives.

In my world no one starves and die,
no mother is torned away from her child.

In my world there are no war and warmongers,
gambling with millions of lives.

But every morning i open my eyes ,
the dreamworld vanishes, only bitter realities come to sight.

--chavii--

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "But every morning i open my eyes ,
    the dreamworld vanishes, only bitter realities come to sight"

    I never saw that ending coming. I was lost in the paradise you were describing and then that last couplet was just a wake up call.. a splash of cold water.
    Excellent write
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful penned you potray here, yet well expressive emotions, you've a gift of tallent like a river, but hopefully you keep them coming..anyway, thanks for you nice comment, much appreciated, take care, best wishes! bert ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this poem is so great, as I was reading it. I hoped at less there is one of us here who got the perfect life, but then again the dream world.I know how it feels, so meaningful. so greatly written.
    buhat acha hai.muje buhat acha laga.
    keep it up.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    What a nice poem! And so well written... Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Nice poem!

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