Abused

by Resplendant Rose   May 25, 2006


Why hold the memories dear
of another worthless year
screaming to be saved
but no one seems to hear

living seems like such a lie
there is no choice but to die
i write this letter to you
just so i can say good-bye

and when you think of me
wondering why i had to flee
know that this is your fault
you are why this came to be

you stripped me of my pride
watching as i faded inside
even before i hit the floor
you knew i had already died

you must have been amused
your heart remains unused
i thought you were the one
my thoughts have been abused

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats sad but very well written well done xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    WOW! great job! you could really feel the emotion with your words! 5/5
    Bloomed Rose

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was a really good poem. Lots of emotion in this one. This is a hard topic to talk about... The rhyme scheme in this one was really different, I really liked it. Good stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard

    I like this

    its flows really fast

    and its not even forced

    5/5 it seems likemaybe
    someone she loved or he loved

    took advantage of them and raped/ect something to them

    abused i guess good write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Fantastic peice, i love the rhyme scheme it is very unique but works really well. the content is well portrayed with some strong expressions. overall great write

    5/5

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