by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Jun 6, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Don\'t waste your time reminiscing the past, |
by trippetta TC
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Love it, good advice & inspiring w/o being sappy |
by Robert
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There is alot of qualities in this poem that are inspirational and thats good but for the most part your telling the reader not showing the reader through visual stories or painting a picture with words just a thought will talk to you later plot121 |
by Hollymariee
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Um , I really like the idea and the whole inspiration part of it .. But theres not really any flow or anything to it , but still 4/5 |
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This poem has a different theme, and i like that |
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Very nice, inspirational. you said you're brutally honest on your profile, so you should check out some of my poems and let me know what you think :) thanks for sharing |