The Error in Terrorism

by Darien   Jun 7, 2006


The Error in Terrorism

March your soldiers one by one,
Freedom fighters aim your gun.
Enemies come from around the bend,
Shoot them down, you must defend.

Fighting hard to keep the peace,
Body counts slowly increase.
Innocent people will die today,
Politicians will keep it that way.

By your country you have been deceived,
Propaganda brain-washed what you believed.
Your government stepped in, a war broke out,
Another civilian massacre the people shout.

Haven't you already set their people free?
So why are you still in their country?
Why do you wait for a terrorist attack,
When it wasn't the people from Iraq?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was excellent, full of meaning and very true. The flow was perfect, the imagery good. Another 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Very good job in the description department. I understand this peice clearly. I feel the same way. (along with millions more)
    The rhyming was very good, but then again, it's expected from you.
    In the news one soldier was quoted as saying "I feel as if we are just going in circles, waiting for someone to blow us up."
    Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    Wow!! Great poem!! This is one of my favorites of yours, probably cuz it is a topic I haven't read about a million times!! Great rhyming and rythmn!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Juls

    Good Job, but I think this poem shouldnt be in saddness and depression(although it is sad) I think it fits in Life and Society a bit more.

    I see you wrote in the same format as th love poem but it seems to work for this poem. Challenge yourself is all I have to say.

    Juls

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Great! i really really like all that i have read of yours, i must say you will be the first to be on my favorite list!

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