The Boy Who Barley Lived

by e LIZ a beth   Jun 15, 2006


He woke up early that morning
all happy and fine
he took a quick glance
to look at the time

he walked into the bathroom
and slowly opened his eyes
but what he saw in the reflection,
came as a big surprise

he was drenched in blood
from his head to toe
he quickly looked around
with nowhere to go

he walked into his bedroom
only to find
he that a car had crashed into his room
at a very late time

he frantically walked to the sitting room
where is mother lay
he white blouse died red of blood
but he had nothing to say

he knew that it was not hers
so he took a second look
to see his father talking away
to a policeman as he shook

he knew it had to be his blood
for there was no one else
the blood that covered her body
was the blood of himself

as we gather here at this park
on this sad lonely day
and play the song he used to hum
and imagine him at play

we think about the memories
of the boy who barley lived
and realize that he gave us things
that we could NEVER give

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  • 17 years ago

    by candace

    Awww that poems was really good but it made me very sad!
    when i was reading this i had a image of it and i love poems that can do that!
    keep up the good work

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Yo dude! wasup.. hehe lol

    um soo yeah about the poem.. i like.. its not my fav but its good..

    o wait the poem isnt my favorite but this part is...

    and realize that he gave us things
    that we could NEVER give

    OMGosh that line is GENIOUS! i love that part sooo soo so so so so so so so so x5498654651321 much! hehe lol =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow alotta talent in ur words! amazing. but im a bit confussed about the stroy. overall u r an amazing writter!! keep up the talent_never stop writting_ and stay strong

    jenie

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    All I can say is
    awwww
    I loved it...very sad though....keep it up