Silent Agony

Nitin
What can I say but WOW! This is really sad and depressing. The imagery is wonderful as are the word choices.

with the sign of a demon on my head
and a piece of holybook in my pocket
i play hide and seek on the land of dead
i die every night and with sunrise i forget

This stanza is so dark and sad. Really hits right in the heart.
~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy

Wow! Such deep intense feeling in this poem.

if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground
if from me love is all you expect
then wail till silent agony makes a sound

Excellent job!
Take Care LOve Cindy

This is an awesome write!

if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground
if from me love is all you expect
then wail till silent agony makes a sound

Love the word choices and imagery in this one!

Another great poem ! The words you have used in this piece just bring it to life. The sadness is really very deep in this write.Take Care Your Friend Cindy

"if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground"

I liked that image, it was so sad but kind of beautiful at the same time if you get what i mean.
I don't phrase my thoughts very well, lol.
Geat overall as usual ;)
5/5
*Gem*