A Friendship That Ended Too Soon

by Kristina   Jun 21, 2006


You were all I had,
You kept me strong,
You were always here for me,
Even when I was wrong.

I thought we would,
Always be best friends,
I thought you would,
Always be here for me.

But then things changed,
You and your mom were fighting,
And you didn't wanna,
Live with her anymore.

You told your dad,
What was going on,
He told you to pack your things,
He was coming to get you.

You called me and told me,
But I didn't believe it was true,
I didn't want you to leave me,
But there was nothing I could do.

Just like that you were gone,
I'll probably never see you again,
But I'll never forget about you,
No matter what happens.

I wish I would of told you,
How much you meant to me,
Now I'll never get the chance,
To let you know what a great friend you were.

Copyright © March 07, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Love You

    Sad poem about losing a friend

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. thats so sad.. im sure you will, someday.. dont you have her email address or something? sorry, im ruining the poem.. hehe.. this was great, full of emotion and good descriptions!

    He told you to pick your things,
    ^ i think it should be "pack" not "pick"

    great job, filled with feelings! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by johnnys_princess

    Good poem, however if you start to rhyme you should contine to rhyme or just have freestyle with no rhmes. A sad but good poem,

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww.. that was so sad.. very good though. I really thought it was going to rhyme all the way through though. There was a lot of emotion in it.

    Oh, and "I wish I would of told you"
    of should be have.

    Great poem. 5/5

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