Ghostly White Eyes

by Jessica   Jun 22, 2006


Sitting all alone
Tied up in a dark room
Struggling to reach the phone
Waiting to meet her doom..

She lets out a cry
But is heard by none
Oh how I wish I could fly
Oh, please god, just let me run..

A hooded figure walks in
A knife is what is held
He is going to enjoy committing this sin
And the effort of being repelled..

He looks at her pale face
Her eyes blackened with fear
This he wants agony to replace
As he brings the blade near..

Screaming with pain
As again and again he slices
Making her slowly go insane
Her body left to its own devices..

She pleads and she begs
But he does not listen
Slowly carving flesh from her legs
The scarlet blood starting to glisten..

He looks around with satisfaction
And closes her now ghostly white eyes
He prods her bloody skin but finds no reaction
And leaves this place to be haunted by her deathly cries..

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  • 17 years ago

    by GreenxTea

    Aah...gave me shivers.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Loves Him

    Great detail... very dark... & well written.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. You did something that was very difficult. You did a double rhyme. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow! That was so dark and morbid! It was very well written, great job. 5/5

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Mmmm delicious. lol jk. wow this was a good poem, it was really detailed...hehe. 5/5