Will Always Be Here Waiting

by Jessica   Jun 23, 2006


Without you my life is blank
Without you I just do not care
These eyes are full of tears and
My heart is starting to tear..

I am sorry for what I did
But I thought it was for the best
Once again, my feelings overpowered me
And I put our love to rest..

Out of the ashes it rises
Becoming what it was once more
Filling my heart and soul again
Now I know our love can only soar..

I will always be here waiting
This love will never subside
If you ever decide to forgive me
I am willing to be your bride..

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  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Sad and beautiful poem, my friend! The rhyming worked brilliantly and the last stanza was so cute! I loved it! Well done, keep writing those amazing poems!

    BtW, Thanks for commenting on my work too. It means a lot! And for helping to find the mistakes I make. Im Spanish, so my English is not perfect... (Or at least by now, lol) Once again, thanks!

    Best wishes,
    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    That's sweet and sad at the same time. a brilliant mix of the two. rock on

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Very well done you seem very nice and honest if ya ever need or wanna talk my name is kody -monkeymadness362@yahoo.com i'd be glad to be here for you ^^ peace

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Aww so gentle and so sweet i love this poem passion is in it aswell as sadness you've comvined them both together and i love it im sorry that you miss your loved one but i cant stop thinking about this poem i love it well done you have created a beaty xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Felicia

    Your poem was excellent.
    it was very sad as well.
    amlost depressing, in a good way.
    i like your style of poetry.
    or, at least i liked THIS poem :D
    good job

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