Pains

I loed this piece. it was heartfelt and deep. also i could feel your pain in every line, but at the same time this poem was very beautiful.

Theres fear behind my eyes
I feel more pain
Than I should know of

i liked those lines alot. i must say i feel exactly the same. and i've felt that way more than once.

I write to help my own tears fade away

That line caught my eye from the start. it was touching, also something i can relate to. after i read this wonderful piece, i couldn't believe how much i could relate to it. like you just described how i felt and feel. it's nice to know there's people out there that feel the same. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

It was something i cant explain.

u r such a good writter...

i m struck by ur words. each line was full of emotions.

great work

Wow! i bow to you! the way yo write it's so amazing

Really deep. really good. 5/5

amandaxx.

Wow. that was amazing. 5/5