Restless Nights

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jun 27, 2006


He was at the peek of his game
But it was her that stood in his way
She knew
He killed her own momma

Visions in my head
More come as I turn to the wall
It all gets worse
My nightmare isnt letting me be

His hands wrapped firmly around her neck
Her eyes in amazement
He couldnt let her ruin his life

Im sick to my stomach
Im trying to rip them out of my head
It doesnt help
These visons get worse and worse

His big, hairy hands
Are sealed against her neck
Hes having fun
Shes scared

Please let them stop
Please dont let this be true
Stop the nightmare
Stop the screams

He has busy eyebrows
And those cold eyes
The breath of a drunk
And a body of steel

He looks horrible
And hes unkept
This vision is making me sick
Please let it stop

Her body's underwater
Floating down the brown river
Just a small girl
Dead by the age of 12

I cant take it anymore
Let it stop
Please make this just a dream
Make it stop

Her face is deceased
And her body has holes
She has deep long gashes
Cut across her body

I pace the darkend room
Trying to think of something else
But the decay is so strong
And the visons come disturbing

He tied her to the bed
And raped her
Seeing hurt in her eyes
He killed his daughter

I had the visons
They found her body
It was her father
That made me have restless nights

**I had a vison this little girl around 12 was going to be killed and it was so true.. I just had to get it out.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is very nice! it was more like a story than a poem! but you wrote in the end

    "I had a vison this little girl around 12 was going to be killed and it was so true.. I just had to get it out"

    i would freak out if i had visions like this!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    O yea..u should get it out i hav visions out 2.....it scared me alot......but did it come true.....im scared for mine to come true....read Why.. for my vision...
    this is really sad.......i lik it alot though...

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    4EvEr --
    "He was at the peek of his game
    But it was her that stood in his way
    She knew
    He killed her own momma"

    Your first stanza. It really confused me. First of all, 'peak' is spelled like that, not like 'peek'. Second, I can`t tell how many people you are referring to. It keeps saying he and her, but it seems like there is only one subject. You may want to consider revising that stanza so it makes more sense to the reader. Other than that, the flow was good. Great job. 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I love this poem! It holds so much suspense and then when you get to the end and you know what the poem is all about your just like ''wow''. Amazing work! I really enjoyed reasing it---5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Omgg that was even scarier!!! You are a great great great writer..All of your stuff it just leaves you in suspense...i love it! 5/5

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