Really dark ..................

by Shriya   Jun 28, 2006


I am alone somewhere
how i got there i don't know
but before exploring this weird place
i heard a screeching sound say
ur family is no more and u will join them
i got scared and then i told myself
get a grip or u will freak out
slowly i walked towards that sound
but wait a minute ! where was i going
i saw something horrible
was i dreaming or was it real???
it was as if a blood sucking monster
was invited to my house
i screamed and that was the last sound i made
and it told in that same screeching voice
u there sit down and let me inspect u
it inspected me and then said
u r fine get up and this the last thing u will do
afraid i stood up
it made some kind of tornado
and then i saw many people in his mouth
i saw my mom
i cried mom
and after that
all was left of me
was my blood dripping from his mouth

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Nice dude lol if its true im sowwy hehe but i love this poem i love all ur poems hun xoxroxyxox com eon msn i miss yaz lol i need u too come bak from india noooow lol !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Very cool im impressed

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Wow very powerful and wat was the creature? vampire, demon wat? i am really curious

    morgan