Sadistic Satire

Wow, I love reading you stuff!! This one was filled with so much emotion!! I love the words you use it paints the picture in my mind!! You are a fantastic writter!!! Is your stuff published?? If it isnt it should be!!! You have beame one of my favorite poets on this site!! the flow and rhyme were fantastic as well!! 5/5!!! Keep it up!!

Nikki, this was just superb.
I love it. You've used such a magnificent choice of vocabulary, and throughout, you tell a gripping story. This is one of the best pieces I've read in a while.
Excellent work. x

Wow babe! that was awesome..i am completely and totally speechless!

Killing Herself Slowly
From Herself She Tends To Run
But No One Can Blame Her
Dad Showed Her How Its Done
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that was my favorite stanza..To me that made up a big part of the story that was told! it was great, you wrote it beautfiully! keep it up sweets you really do have talent!

Nikki -
This was terrific! Just simply, wow. It really kept my attention, and I enjoyed reading it. The rhyming was good, not so simple. It really added a nice twist that most people fail to include in their writing.
Much thanks for your comments and votes on my poetry, I really appreciate it. You yourself are a breathtaking writer, so promise to keep it up. =D
5/5

Love much,
Sam

Tragic portrayal of something no one must ever go through. your writing shines through what you have undergone and the beauty of your writing is proof enough that you have won over the demons; and that you will always shine.

take care.
good luck always and peace
shobhana