by Yrem Crish Jul 2, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Sunrise starts to dawn |
by Marvellous
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Good job. Ride on. |
by Silent Girl
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I like the flow of this of this poem that i can relate to :) |
by Xanthe
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I don't think this poem should be further revised (I am not lazy haha) because it was written years ago, and reading this shows your evolution in poetry. It shows how much you've grown. |
by Victoria
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Cute ryhme! :) |
by yogi73
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Very sweet message in the poem. |