Hear Me Naught

by Dacey Flame   Jul 4, 2006


Reality knew me not, nor you, till now.
You're told the simple, but you just want the complex.
You hear me naught, less I speak.
You've gone off, again, im left, again, trekking behind.
Just days? Weeks? Months? Years, have passed since innocence.
You hear me naught, less I speak.
Seems life no longer cares, who's left behind.
Take no example, girl, stay for the slow, the weak, the hurt.
Eyes that see the smallest frown, yet ears deaf to the loudest cry.
You hear me naught, less I speak.
I cant believe life's passed you by,
Am I the only one, wanting to turn back?
A time to laugh passes, a time to screams ahead,
You hear me naught, less I speak.
Tell a tale of lies, to the weak of confidence,
Seeing but the trouble placed upon them.
And yet you remain unfazed by your actions.
Unknowing of the unspoken.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Great job, this is very good dacey, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Interesting. The only thing I found a problem with was:

    Your told the simple, but you just want the complex.
    You hear my naught, less I speak.

    Your should be You're and hear my naught i think you meant hear me naught.

    Oh and I'm not sure if you did this on purpose.. but the naught you use is like naughty and the ... well ther other is not like "Get to you room!"
    "I will not."
    and the other is "You're very naughty." So yeah... You might have meant to do that but IDK. Great Poem Babe

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Actually.. this one's my favorite. i hadn't read it yet. you are a super-skilled poem-ninja!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. I like this. 5/5
    -Kakashi

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