Wax Of Love

by End Of Eternity   Jul 5, 2006


Please let me know if you also feel
like a thrown away, wasted wax of love
like a broken wing of a new born dove
like an extra star fallen right from above

Please let me know if you also feel
like running from this awkward situation
getting far away from this dying addiction
searching for the reason of our creation

Please don't tell me if you ever feel
like being in love with me once again
like pulling me from this everlasting pain
hiding me in your arms as if world is insane

Please don't tell me if you ever feel
like seeing me smile one more time
holding on to me as if leaving is crime
whispering those words not worth a dime

Please let me know if you also feel
like living a life of a helpless slave
please don't tell me if you ever feel
like painting thorns on my beautiful grave

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    It had been awhile since I read this piece. It is so deep and sad. Yet it is beautiful. The imagery is awesome.

    Please don't tell me if you ever feel
    like being in love with me once again
    like pulling me from this everlasting pain
    hiding me in your arms as if world is insane

    This stanza really hit me. Excellent writing.
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You amaze me with your writing! I stand in awe. Excellent! Your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
    I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Very good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Beautiful, very well written. adding you to my favorites. I like your work

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