by Krissey Jul 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Car doors slammed, the stereo screamed, |
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Wow this poem made me cry! such emotion and feelings!! i just loved it so much! |
by Layla
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That's really amazing- I love the phrasing. 5/5. |
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:( |
by Chantelle
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Thats so sad but amazing hun, It flowed so well and told a sad but beautiful story. Great piece 5/5 |
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Last line of the poem.. "were" of him, not was. |