Doll

It was really great,and beatifully written especially those

I felt like a child on her first day of school
vulnerable - no defenses set up

This was great,good job

This poem was good but i didnt like it as much as i like the others, it made a very good point about how we see things 4/5 sorry

This is really good! I know where you are going with this. i felt this way when I liked this guy. 5/5

I really liked the similies in this one, i thought it was very well written.

Very well written. A great poem. You really put emotion and you're similies really help you understand the poem more. 5/5

Taylor