Waiting

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Jul 9, 2006


I lie in total darkness
As i look around the room
Its full of misery, hatred and so much gloom
The shadows are making faces
Trying to scare me away
Even though i want to run
I know that i must stay
Im waiting for you to save me
To come and take me to another place
One where there is no hunger and no scrap of food goes to waste
A place where its never lonely
And Im not afraid to smile
I think that Ill be waiting for quite a while

Im thinking of your loving face
And your honest eyes
When i looked into them
I knew you would tell no lies
So why did you promise to come for me
When we both knew you wouldnt
I guess you didnt want to upset me
Or maybe you knew that you shouldnt
So Im lying in the dark
In a room filled with my pain
And i swear theres only one thing thats keeping me sane
The hope that youll come for me one day....

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  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very nice one! Love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    The poem started off really nice and powerful, but the in the end it started to die and get less powerful so the end klindof left you in an akward state..like..."oh, its over"..well thats the only thing i though needed a bit of improvement..otherwise it was a very beautiful dark poe,:)

  • 17 years ago

    by the middle

    This is good... well written and good rhymes...i enjoyed reading it:)
    take care, xoxo