A week of regrets

by Ren   Jul 10, 2006

I sunk so low
with every breath I took
inhaling that sweet forgiveness
releasing all my stress

I felt so broken
I collapsed
and gave away
everything I ever believed in

I gave in
That powder
Just seemed like heaven
I felt so safe

I felt so dead
so weak
Nothing on my mind
Nothing in my heart

I broke down
sobbing as I plunged
that tranquil needle
into my flesh once more

They found out
I was beaten
and cursed upon
I sunk so low...

I give up
with a gun in my hand
I regret my mistakes
and fall

TOTALLY NOT ABOUT ME! I just...I dont know. It came to me in a dream! JUST KIDDING! I have no idea how I came up with this...so yeah.


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  • 15 years ago

    by Eman D

    Man alot of similarities. Good write tho. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Its like a 100 out of 5, hehehe, so amazing, you gots good writings, keep up the exallent work

  • 16 years ago

    by Tortured Soul

    Wow i felt this one.. its good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam

    Haha okay so the reason i couldn't get logged in is because i forgot that i changed my password... :B so how was shopping with the holy man? i mean jesus** xD lol :BBB

    tay < just to confuse people mwuhahaha

  • 16 years ago

    by Ren

    Whooooooshh this is an awesomely awesomeness of awesome poems.... ... O_o ...EVER x) wheeeeee . i have bad ummmmm typing/grammar/punctuation skillzzzz when imma not in school :BBB