The real world, baby =/

by Ren   Oct 15, 2006

She crawls through the door
in her mind
she is weeping
drags herself
to her bed
lays there helpless

alcohol drips
controlling her
Killing her
Destroying her

Gets the best of her every time
Tormenting her
breaking her

She falls


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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Pretty cool. Never read anything like that before. I liked it! :)


  • 16 years ago

    by argueing with the rain

    Love it. u captured the feeling that society lays on us.

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Good poem.
    peace out
    anna soffe

  • 16 years ago

    by Nathan Hickling

    Very well done, a clear meaning, and not too heavy to read either. very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by RaNdOmRoB

    Ren that poem was full of meaning u will become a great poet that was soo deep