The hardest decision

by Tainted Beauty   Jul 11, 2006


The tears fall down my face,
And your face pops into my mind,
I can feel my heart breaking,
As I struggle to decide,

I tear apart my thoughts,
I analyze each opinion thoroughly,
I could never really tell,
If you ever loved me,

The hot tears sting my cheeks,
I remember the cruel words you said,
I couldnt stay and face it,
So I ran away instead,

You seem so different now,
Not the man I fell in love with,
Its so hard to talk to you,
But I dont want to do this,

Your empty promises sting in my mind,
I cant be imagining it,
I know youre feelings have changed,
But youre too scared to admit,

I love you with all my heart,
And I dont want to make this mistake,
I dont want to lose you, but Im unsure,
This is the hardest decision Ill ever make.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hmmm.
    not as good as your previous work but its still good.
    it doesnt flow as well.
    and there's not as much meaning and depth in your words.
    ~Emah
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was beautiful, it was sad, but it really touched me and you have so much talent, i believe that you will go far with your woek, keep it up
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Ugh I Feel This Way With Jeremy All The Time, Its Like You Knew My Situation When You Were Writing This Poem, Only a True Poet Can Touch Those Personal Spots...Your Gifted...I Hope You Know That
    *I Luv U Stephy!*
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    "And your faces pops into my mind,"
    ['face' unless you are talking about more than one person]

    This was a really sad poem, and it is as if you brought me into your life, and experience your emotions. This was a good poem, the rhymes were great, and the flow was good. Awesome stuff!

  • 17 years ago

    by Juls

    I struggled with the flow of the poem more so in the second to last stanza.
    Idk, it wasnt my favorite of your work but you have some room to improve. good job though, just keep working

    Juls

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