I Want To Cut.

by Jenni Marie   Jul 13, 2006


I fight so hard not to cut.
I want out of his horrible rut.
I'm standing on the ledge of despair
Does anybody even care?

I have no more strength to give
I never though i'd have to fight just to live.
My emotions are battered and bruised
Inside i am so confused.

Why do i push people away?
Why, for my mistakes, must i continue to pay?
Why can't people forgive and move on
Why do i sometimes wish, from this world, i was gone?

I don't know how much longer i can keep up this facade
My strength has begun to fade.
I'm standing on the ledge
And soon i'm gonna go off the edge.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww sad but i feel your pain! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Wow i really liked this one, on a subject we both understand greatly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    In the first staza you rhymed "cut" with "rut".. it just didnt sound right.. i know it's hard and i do it too sometimes.. but try to think of another word and i think it would sound better.
    other then that i dont see anything wrong with it. all the other rhymes were good and the poem flowed well together. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy F

    This is so sad.
    Hopefully you dont feel like this.
    I really like it. Keep up the good work!
    x3 Mandy

  • 17 years ago

    by xlovelyxdespairx

    I liked the poem

    much luv,
    jubilee dominguez

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