Always Loved You

by End Of Eternity   Jul 14, 2006


Sitting here in a crowded place
drinking to satisfy my lonely soul
abusing words on a piece of paper
pushing my hands just to crawl

my pen bleeds on this white sheet
while creating a heart without a beat
and i take another shot in my veins
never knew venom will taste so sweet

few more breaths left before i surrender
to this music playing deep in my ears
& the words i am writing on this red sheet
coming straight from my soul without any fear

but before i leave this place forever
there is one last thing i would like to do
to make sure that you do read these words
and realize how much i always loved you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your poetry really reaches in and touches my heart. This was no exception! Excellent job my dear friend!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one a lot.
    The whole meaning, the whole concept, the whole thing!
    Just an overall amazing poem, with a poignent (sp?) ending.
    You need to get writing some more mister!! lol
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    I love this poem, its been put together very well. Keep up the good work!!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by WEIRDO ^.^

    Its a sad poem but really cute

  • 17 years ago

    by katie99

    Hey thats a realy good poem it relayes much 2 me and i realy like it we should be friends heres my email address babyfaryloveyou@yahoo.com wriite me so we can be friends

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