Found no place but heaven

by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel   Jul 15, 2006


She had a broken spirit
Withered away
Lost all hope
And gone astray

Bleeding threw
The veins she popped
With a knife in her hand
That suddenly dropped

He saw her scars
She's all alone at school
Broken and battered
Thought of as a fool

He walked down her path
Hoping they'd meet
For this was one girl
He wanted to greet

He glanced at her eyes
And found only shame
Inside she's bleeding
While they think this a game

He took hold of her hand
And said it's alright
I'm going to help you
So lets get on with this fight

She saw in his eyes
That his passion was real
And his heart was one
She had wanted to steal

She grabbed his hand
Hoping to make things right
With the look in his eyes
He was willing to fight

He was to see her after school
On that Friday night
But things didn't go as they planned
And he got in a fight

The kids didn't care
For the new friend he made
Which became clear
When his time came to fade...

So once again she's left alone
And time is a constant hate
She figured that she'd end this pain
Let the angles decide her fate

So that night she took her life
Willing to be with her love
And ended up in heaven
With the angles up above

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww, this is so sad and beautiful, i loved how it flowed so well and i had a mental image in my head while reading this, its absolutely wonderful, keep it up,xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very pretty and sweet. The rhymes seemed a bit forced and it should be "bleeding through" not "bleeding threw". I think that the poem was a little un-original but was good all the same. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This was really very well expressed, sad ending...but thats what life is all about
    well written

    all the best and take care
    5/5