To you katie [part IV]

by The Poetic Child   Jul 16, 2006


I don't know why I'm still here
Still back on this earth writing
I just cant stand to see
Our Hearts out there fighting

While I'm out here for you
I'm out fighting to get you back
I couldn't even sleep
my heart just cant relax

My mind is constantly on you
my heart is constantly bleeding
if you don't know why, I'm telling you
Its you that I'm really needing

Tears tracing down my face
and you cant even see it
but trust me there there
just please believe it

You were my everything girl
you were my air to breath
and now that your gone
the air starts to leave

And now I'm losing my air
I'm dieing really slow
so the pain takes forever
I'm just letting you know

I don't know how many times
i really have to say
I love you baby sooooooo much
and i will everyday

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    So... sad.
    i know you really love her, and everything happens for a reason, so if it is meant to be, (which i believe it is) she will change her mind again and you will get her back... good luck!
    Friggin incredible poem, great rhymes
    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 17 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    Wow...you are a truly amazing poet. I read all of them, and I have to say that Katie would be crazy not to love you. I'm sorry, because I know how you feel, having gone through something similar, and I hope it all works out for you in the end, I really do.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.... that's really AMAZING. i read every single one. If she really can't see how much you mean to her... that's just crazy. i would tell my friends, she isn't worth it. but not in this case, she really is worth it to you.
    I'm so sorry, i hope everything gets better.
    Your friends are your main goal, i've been through it before.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By The Poetic Child