When You Look at Me

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jul 16, 2006


Look at me and tell me what you see.
Do you see a girl in love with the world?
Or do you see all the tears I cried,
all the hurt I hide inside.

Look at me, tell me what you see.
Do you see a girl living and loving it?
Or do you see a girl that hits the floor,
behind closed doors.

Look at me, what do you see?
Do you see a girl living her dream, in her eyes a gleam?
Or do you see a girl out of her brain,
going insane?

When you look at me I know what you see.
You see a girl that dances around
and hides her sorrowful sounds.
All you see is the smile ,
while I swallow the bile.

I know what you see when you look at me.
You see what I wanted you to,
what's on the surface.
You see the fake me.

***I think this one needs a little work (especially the last stanza) so please comment and tell me what you think. Thanks xD

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  • 16 years ago

    by Joy

    Beautifully written.
    It's so true sometimes..

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    WELL WRITTEN DARK POEM

  • 17 years ago

    by *Cosmic*Whispers*

    I Like it, It's really true I know exactly hw yu feel, sorry i aint posed anything new I've lost my inspiration lol

    keep up the good work i look foward to reading more soon

    love
    Xx-me-xX

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Such a great poem keep up the good work.. bye

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