Your last chance

by Nelle   Jul 19, 2006


You keep running in and out of my life
It never fails, every other week it's just the same
I gave you a second chance, I let you back in
But, this time you have caused me too much pain

I love you with my heart, why can't you just see
You must be blind to my pain, or else you just don't care
This is not what is meant to be
I need you to realize you are what i need

I know I upset you and I'm sorry
I didn't mean to hurt you
I love you for you, and nothing more
You are one i truly adore

I know I told you that if you left this time it was forever
But, why can't i break free from my past
I don't want you out of my life, I wish you would just believe in me
Was our friendship really not meant to last

Where ever you go, or whatever you do
Keep this in mind when you get blue
I love you, and you have my heart
But, what ever you do with it now is completely up to you

( I love you, but i guess this is goodbye)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Where ever you go, or whatever you do
    Keep this in mind when you get blue
    I love you, and you have my heart
    But, what ever you do with it now is completely up to you

    The last stanza seemed a little rocky and thrown together. I think that is the only thing you need to fix. You don't even have to fix it, it is just my opinion and I may be the only one who thinks that way.

    It is a great poem and the emotions jumped out of it. Good job.

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Letting go is one of the hardest things to do. You always seem to grow so attached to a person and can't let go. To be honest, it's the best thing for you right now. It seems this person is putting you through a lot of pain, and you just need to let them go. Maybe now you can be happier. Hope all is well. Take care Nelle!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is a really good poem...Not my favorite, but it's very heart warming and sad. I'm sorry you have to go through this..

  • 17 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Oh how beautiful.
    I liked the simplistic innocence of the lines, such as

    I know I upset you and I'm sorry

    There was something calm and tearful in that lines, that, well, really touched my heart.
    It made me sad for you.

    //T.L.//

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    This is an excellent poem. The flow was great and the meaning behind it was even greater. I love it. I can tell from reading this that you are an excellent poet. Keep it up.
    5/5

    >black&&blue

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